Best of Bad Decisions: Pg16

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This page and the next page gave me no end of headaches. There are a number of mistakes that I just sort of gave up on and hope no one notices. Although it seems that the problems that look like giant eyesores to me, no one ends up noticing anyway. The things I miss is what everyone catches. But I think that's true for most artists.

Scrapped most of the dialog again, so please tell me if there's a mistake. I've never been very good at keeping to a script. I've reached the point where I've just started planning for that and including extra reaction/face panels just to compensate for additional or revised dialog.