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December 5, 2009
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  • Mood: Questionable
  • Listening to: Infra-Red (Placebo)
  • Reading: Godchild
  • Watching: Cartoons!
  • Playing: I think not
  • Eating: Feeed me D=
  • Drinking: Water
Comic Reviews: [link] [link]

First and foremost, it’s Kahea’s birthday. She is 19. Go flood her inbox and front page with well wishes. I have a gift for her but can’t show a picture of it till she gets it in the mail ^^

:spotlight-left::iconkaheaniehal::spotlight-right:

Before I get into the personal stuff (which you aren’t interested in anyway) I’ll start with what some people have been asking me about. Recently people have sent me notes or comments asking me if I’ll review their comic or some one else’s comic. Yes and no. If you really want to receive a critical review, I will do one for whoever wants. If it’s just one or two, I’ll throw it in my journal somewhere. If I get enough, maybe I’ll make it a separate journal. Be warned, however, that I will be as critical as always. If you ask for a review just to get attention, I should also tell you that I’m not a very well known person on DA, so aha! Your plan will fail. Sorry. And I’m not doing it for attention either, I am certainly not the end-all be-all critic. I just enjoy doing reviews, and a lot of people seemed a bit itchy to have their own work reviewed. So many people complain about wanting critique, but never take the steps to achieve them. Please remember that if you reply here asking for me to critique your comic, the critique will be posted in my journal, AKA: viewed publicly. I don’t have a lot of watchers so it won’t be that big of a deal, and hey, it may just give you a little boost in readers. However, the adverse is also true, it may send some negative attention your way. You’ve been warned.

However, I won’t review comics that you ask me to review if it’s not yours. What you can do, is ask that person if they want to have their comic critiqued, and have them send me a note or reply here. I’d also reaaally love to review some short stories but, I’m almost convinced that outside of myself and a small handful of raconteurs, DA doesn’t have any patron writers.  What a tragedy.

Now onto the personal stuff (the exit is to your right, thank you for reading) I’ll probably take Cryptic Allusions offline in about a week or two, so for those of you who want to read it (I’m only fooling myself I suppose), better do it quick or save it to your computers. I’m supposed to be looking into publishers but, I can’t help but say I am daunted by it. My writing is inherently flawed and I’m in no way convinced that’s it marketable material. Either way, it’s taking up space in my gallery, and if I ever actually follow through with getting it published, I will have to take it offline. And of course, If publication means that the comic will have to stop, I will not seek publication.

I’m at a rather interesting crossroads in my life, as I’m moving away from the idea of majoring in Biology, to major in English/Literature as a teaching degree. I feel that this is where I more naturally belong, and I also feel that I’m lacking much of a choice.

On top of that, it’s just a rather difficult time in general here. But I suppose it’s a similar song for near every person out there right about now.

Final note (for those of you who made it this far): if I did another article similar to the Supercritic ones ([link], [link], [link] , what subject would you like to see? Please make suggestions, I’d love to hear them.

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:iconlordesscass:
*Cough cough* I has a story. No, it's not a short story but there's not a lot to it right now. If you wish, go medieval on it. I haven't finished a ton so I can do edits easily. :P
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:icontallix:
~tallix Jan 1, 2010  Student Artist
myself and :iconsnowback: are working on redoing our joint comic at the moment- we'll be starting to post the pages in febuary. I wondered if you could possibley (sp?) give us a critique when we have a decent number of pages up?
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:iconsongdog-strayfang:
*Songdog-StrayFang Jan 2, 2010  Student Writer
I sure can if both of you are alright with it.
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:iconpawnee:
ah man I'm still reading your other comic reviews and flipping through those pages..

It would be really funny to read your film reviews. considering that most films are utter crap...lol
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:icongingaparachi:
Hello, i've got an unfinished comic called saving a dying planet (or SADP) that you can review.

So if you have the time, i'd like to see what you think of it. [link]
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:iconsongdog-strayfang:
*Songdog-StrayFang Dec 9, 2009  Student Writer
Can do. I'll add it to the list.
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:iconlarkpaw:
~Larkpaw Dec 6, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Psh, do you want me to continue editing CA then?
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:iconsongdog-strayfang:
*Songdog-StrayFang Dec 8, 2009  Student Writer
If you're up to it, yes, but I've decided also to go through all of the chapters and make changes as well.
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:iconlarkpaw:
~Larkpaw Dec 8, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Hm, so do you want me to wait until you make your changes, or would you prefer me going ahead with editing now?
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:iconalfafilly:
*AlfaFilly Dec 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*slowly raises hand*
I have a short story you could review if wanted. I would have a lot more considering I'm planning a book of them for my one group of characters (for funzies mainly, not destined for publication) but with my comic in the way it seems to be neglected. I still need to finish chapter 2 of the second story. Rather a shame as writing has been a big passion of mine. Despite how much I fail at grammar. :<

I do manage to have one full one up though (it has 4 chapters in all):
[link]

My writing skills suck major eggs though.

As for comic critiquing, you can do TS if you'd like. I wouldn't mind. Though I personally feel it is so bad it doesn't deserve much of a review. :P But maybe I'm just being my worse critic again.


Best of luck with Cryptic Allusions! I'll see if I can take a quick snippets of read before it is taken off :D If all else fails for big companies, though, you can always crudely self-publish through sites like Lulu.com.

Biology sounds like a great subject! I've been rethinkng my future plans as well. Graphic Design is currently way too competitive and full to burst.
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