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  • Mood: Distracted
  • Listening to: Guitar vs Piano
  • Reading: Tess
  • Watching: You
  • Playing: Nothing...aw
  • Eating: Strawberries
  • Drinking: English TEa
For those of you looking for more info on The Great Journey, please be patient. The person who is going first (Kahea) sort of got in trouble with schoolwork and so...she's doing school work. Can't be helped.

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Psh....I'm literaturely depressed (Pun) I'm almost done with writing Cryptic Allusions (just started ch19, and there are only 23 chapters+ epilogue) I always get sad when I'm close to finishing something. Its like, having to kill your children. When you spend 2 years developing and writing for these characters, you become rather attached. And then, it comes to an end.

I've been trying to think of what I'll do after CA, and I'm stuck. I'd like some opinions on what sounds more interesting to you. Originally I planned to do a novel called Angel Gates after finishing Cryptic Allusions, but now I think I might want to go back and rewrite Benediction of the Beast, which was the novella that I wrote as a sophomore for a project. It had a great plot, but was poorly written and I had to cut alot due to school and time restrictions. I really, really hate trying to summarize stories but...

Angel Gates: Takes place in Medieval Age. The gates to heaven exist on earth, if you can make it through. God has been asleep for hundreds of years, unknown to the living world, and the angels have been running heaven. And failing at it. Without the power of God, their abilities of inspection are limited, so that many unworthy of heaven make it passed the gates. Asking for forgiveness of suicide just before death, Nicholai does make it into heaven, but comes armed with a vendetta. He will risk hell to achieve his revenge. Heaven is not flawless...

Benediction of the Beast: Modern world. The graveyard is filled with frightening things. Dead things, and big dogs. After being bit by Sable Cur, a monstrous black hound, Lyra is bound to his will. And his orders are clear: kill those who he has damned; men, women, and children included. She transforms at his will to a slavering beast, competing to become a permanent envoy by acting under his command. While part of her indulges this darkness, another part is longing for the light. To control the stirring abyss may very well mean her death, but all goals worth reaching will come with their risks. Truth be told, there is no truth.
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:icongardenette:
~Gardenette Sep 24, 2009   General Artist
Benediction of the Beast is appealing to my inner emo or whatever that little monster is.... (tho it will nevar show. =D)
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:icongoldenchimes:
I am rather partial to swords, glory and general middle age stuff. Angel Gates sound very promising, but Benediction of the Beast already sounds super intriguing. Personally, I'd be happy to see either of them...XD
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:iconpawnee:
well anything you write will be well worth it! :D

no offense but the title of the Angel gates sounds...cliche just a teeeeeeny bit. Bad souap opera memories....coming back....must resist! XD

anyways, both sound really good. Makes you wonder how talentless franchises (cough stephenie meyer, dan brown cough) make so much money and fame when REAL talent is on DA for free. hmm....
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:iconagii:
~Agii Apr 27, 2009  Student Digital Artist
augh, i love them both!
are you willing to multi-task? ^^;
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:iconsongdog-strayfang:
*Songdog-StrayFang Apr 27, 2009  Student Writer
I would never try writing two things at once x.x It ruins a writer when they try that. You have to focus and put all your effort into one thing and make it as good as you can. Plus, you finish earlier when you work one at a time.
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:iconagii:
~Agii Apr 28, 2009  Student Digital Artist
good point there.
well then, err. err.
I HATE CHOOSING (i'mma real woman, lawl)
errrrrrrhm.
a-a-angel one? with heaven 'n such? ;P
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:iconnecrothoroloth:
Personally, I loved Benediction of the Beast dearly. I would be most pleased to see it in its full glory. But then, you could probably already guess my opinion on this matter, with my dark leanings and macabre taste.
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:iconsongdog-strayfang:
*Songdog-StrayFang Apr 27, 2009  Student Writer
You're the only one who read it from start to finish. Kahea read some, but then lost the link. I miss the old characters and I felt I never did the story justice D= Plus, since I know how most of it goes, I wouldn't need to do the extensive planning I did for CA. But I want to improve; there were so many thing I rushed on, left out, didn't explain, etc. It was great practice, but I think it deserves another chance.
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:iconnecrothoroloth:
I'm sorry to tell you that I lost the link on my tansition back to my home country. Even so, I'm still fond of Lyra and the Sable Cur.
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:iconkaheaniehal:
~Kaheaniehal Apr 27, 2009   General Artist
Gaaaaah they both sound so good. D:
Could I illustrate either of them? >w>
Not in comic form, but for scenes or make a cover or something. <3

Because I'm such a sacrilegious blasphemer, I think I'll toss a 'vote' for Angel Gates.
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